Action Novels and Military Fiction Book Editors

A great “action” novel will keep readers flipping pages. Action fiction is a literary genre that includes spy novels, adventure stories, mysteries, and tales of terror and intrigue. Each of these genres requires similar elements of fiction—and each is a challenging task.

A strong action novel will feature a protagonist with a deep backstory whom we empathize with and hopefully grow to love. This hero faces a conflict that becomes more complicated, more dangerous, and seemingly insurmountable as the novel progresses. Fueling the conflict is a persistent nemesis who seems undefeatable.

Brisk, crisp prose with energized action verbs is often required to keep the story’s engine running. So too are multidimensional side characters, vividly drawn settings, and appeals to our emotions and senses—sights, sounds, smells, and feel. Whether traditionally publishing or self-publishing, reviewers will notice and remark about the pacing, the dramatic climax, and the resolution—the essentials of a great action novel. If you didn’t hire a professional editor and/or proofreader, they will also notice typos and narrative grammar mistakes. If your dialogue is grammatically correct, they’ll point that out as well.

Military fiction has a special challenge. A large percentage of military fiction readers are current or former service men and women. Military service itself is based on careful adherence to rules and procedures, and such readers expect military novel authors to be meticulously accurate. Our military editors are well versed in the vernacular and terms of the armed forces, and they are laser focused on accuracy and consistency of style and spelling.

Completing a publish-ready novel is a monumental effort, and you can’t do it without professional help. Team with Book Editing Associates in your quest to fulfill the book of your dreams.

David Alan

David Alan

Line editing, copy editing, content/developmental editing, proofreading, query letters

Fiction: novels, young adult, children’s, historical fiction
Nonfiction: memoirs, history, health/wellness, mental health, personal finance, military, politics, sports, biographies, social issues, and more

DAVID ALAN has edited more than 200 books and authored nearly 100 books for 30 publishers, including St. Martin’s Press, HarperCollins, Lyons Press, Random House, Running Press, Warner Books, Total/Sports Illustrated, and Scholastic.

His books have generated more than $20 million in revenue and have appeared on the Today show, The Early Show, CNN, MSNBC, and NPR. His rating on is 4.2, based on more than 3,000 ratings.

Webster Noah

Webster Noah

Major commercial fiction and nonfiction, film

Webster Noah is a writer and editor of commercial fiction and nonfiction.

His bestselling authors include Chris Wallace, Brett Favre, Matthew Modine, and Steven Pressfield. Alden’s titles have been featured on Sixty Minutes, The Today Show, Oprah’s Super Soul Sunday, and on the front page of The New York Times.

Upcoming titles Noah has developed and edited include YA fiction, Girl From Nowhere (Bloomsbury, 2020) and memoir, 60 Stories About 30 Seconds (Post Hill/Simon and Schuster, 2020).

Two of Noah’s books have sold to studios for over $1 million.

Noah founded and was editor in chief of a publishing company (under Penguin Random House) where he bought, developed, edited, and helped to write dozens of books.

He has written for The New York Times Magazine and Departures magazine.

Among other studio films, Noah produced The Conspirator, starring Robin Wright and James McAvoy, directed by Robert Redford. He is a member of the Writers Guild of America (WGA).

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