{"id":113155,"date":"2023-04-24T23:33:36","date_gmt":"2023-04-24T23:33:36","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/www.book-editing.com\/?p=113155"},"modified":"2023-04-25T22:03:06","modified_gmt":"2023-04-25T22:03:06","slug":"five-stages-of-drafting-a-novel","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.book-editing.com\/five-stages-of-drafting-a-novel\/","title":{"rendered":"Five Stages of Drafting a Novel"},"content":{"rendered":"\n

How many drafts does it take before your novel is finished?<\/p>\n\n\n\n

When should you start line editing? When do you put in your subplots? How much planning should you do before you start your first draft?<\/p>\n\n\n\n

The answers to each of these questions will be different for every writer, but if you\u2019re new to writing, just thinking about them can be paralysing, and many writers state that their biggest problem is not knowing where to start.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

So in case you feel overwhelmed by the scale of the project of writing a novel, we\u2019ve put this article together to try to help break the process down into more manageable chunks, and demystify the novel writing process.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

This is intended to be a framework that you can use to help guide you when you\u2019re learning your own process, and is fully intended to be malleable \u2013 so as you become more experienced, and get more novels under your belt, you\u2019ll develop your own way of working.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

But for now, let us take you by the hand\u2026<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Stage One \u2013 Preparation<\/strong><\/h1>\n\n\n\n

Before you actually start writing your first draft, it is advisable to do some preparation.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Some writers (commonly known as Pantsers) prefer to do the minimum of planning, because they like to discover the story through the act of writing.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Other writers prefer to explore the story in their heads, and make lots of notes about plot, characters, subplots, themes and more, before putting pen to paper, or fingers to keyboard.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

And of course, most people mingle somewhere between these two extremes.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

You may already know roughly where on the planning \/ pantsing spectrum you fall \u2013 personally, when I first started writing, the idea of doing a first draft without any planning was so horrifying to me, I literally didn\u2019t believe anyone wrote that way.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Now I have been fully dispossessed of that misconception, as I know many extremely successful and bestselling authors are pantsers.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

On the other side of the same coin, there are some people (side-eyes Stephen King) who think it\u2019s \u2018cheating\u2019 to plan a novel in any way, and not let it just flow from your sub-conscious, as if the Universe is simply using you as its conduit.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

But many successful writers have reams of notes, folders and spreadsheets which help them formalise their creativity and create novels in a very cerebral way.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

So, let\u2019s all agree that there\u2019s no \u2018right\u2019 way to write a novel.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

However, it\u2019s worth noting that neither way is easier or quicker than the other. As a rule of thumb, if you do more planning, then your first draft will be stronger, and you will spend less time editing.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

On the other hand, if you dive straight in, you will save a lot of time up front, but you are very likely to spend a lot more time on the editing process.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Whichever you are, it\u2019s good to try to lean into the one that makes you feel uncomfortable now and then, as it can teach you new things about writing, and you may be surprised to find some elements of it really work for you.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

As an instinctive Planner, often I try to limit the amount of prework I do, and have found the discovery process extremely enjoyable and enlightening.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Likewise, I have had Pantsers say that they have had a go at using my Novel Writing Roadmap, and have realised that planning out certain areas of their books really helps them avoid the sticky parts they usually get mired in later down the line.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

If you would like to do a lot of detailed planning in this initial stage, then you could follow this step-by-step guide<\/a>.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

If you don\u2019t want to do a lot of planning, that\u2019s fine –  but it\u2019s usually a good idea to at least have a rough idea of how the story is going to end.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Stage Two \u2013 First Draft<\/strong><\/h1>\n\n\n\n

The best advice I can give for writing your first draft is to try to do it as fast as you can, and don\u2019t edit.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Reading over what you\u2019ve done and editing it is the fastest way to get stuck and never reach the end.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

However, if you plough through without looking back or worrying about anything, then when you\u2019ve completed your first draft, it will teach you so much more about those opening chapters than if you\u2019d spent months tweaking and editing them before writing the final scenes.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

You may want to go back a few pages each time you sit down to write, to remember where you are and get back into the zone, but \u2013 and I can\u2019t state this strongly enough \u2013 DO NOT be tempted to start back at the beginning each time.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Once you\u2019ve got a few novels under your belt, you may find it useful to do what I call the \u2018blanket stitch\u2019 approach, where you go back a few chapters and write on, editing those ones and writing a few news ones, and then repeat from your new stopping point. But if you are new to writing, then even that can slow you down too much.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

So, don\u2019t worry about getting it right – the first draft is just you telling the story to yourself.<\/em> <\/p>\n\n\n\n

Once you\u2019ve got the words of the first draft down on paper, then you can go about improving it \u2013 that\u2019s what redrafting is for \u2013 but you can\u2019t redraft a partial draft.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

You just need to get the rough skeleton of the story down, however it takes. You don\u2019t need to worry about elegant prose, or getting in every detail. Focus on ideas, conflict and characters \u2013 not fancy words.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

One of my favourite writing quotes explains it beautifully:<\/p>\n\n\n\n

\u201cI’m writing a first draft and reminding myself that I’m simply shovelling sand into a box so that later I can build castles.\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n

\u2015 Shannon Hale<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Stage Three \u2013 Major Redraft<\/strong><\/h1>\n\n\n\n

You\u2019ve done it! You\u2019ve got the first draft done. I feel like this is a major accomplishment even if you\u2019ve got thirty novels under your belt, but if it\u2019s your first one, then it truly is a huge achievement, and you should feel extremely proud.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Only a small fraction of people who set out to write a book actually manage to complete the first draft \u2013 and the first one is by far the hardest. My first first draft took me about a year. Now I can bash out a first draft in a month fairly consistently, and have been known to do it within a few weeks.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

If the first draft was the scaffolding of the novel, revealing its general shape, then the next draft is where you put in the bricks.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Where before it was all about getting down the core story, now you can start working on more layers.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

If you didn\u2019t do so in your planning, now\u2019s a good time to go through and make sure all the major story structure beats<\/a> are there, and also run through each of the subplots to make sure they\u2019re consistent and complete.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

You can also look at each of these elements in isolation:<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Main characters<\/strong><\/h2>\n\n\n\n

Are your main characters three-dimensional, with inner conflicts and backstories? Do they have an arc where they change from the beginning of the story to the end? Are they likeable? Can you develop them further?<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Supporting Characters<\/strong><\/h2>\n\n\n\n

Are the supporting characters varied enough? Are they all pulling their weight? Do they have their own subplots and mini-arcs? Do they each relate to the main heart of the story in some way?<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Themes<\/strong><\/h2>\n\n\n\n

What themes are in the story – either deliberate or emerging? Can these be enhanced? Or are there too many themes, which are getting muddled? In this case can they be streamlined?<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Conflict and Peril<\/strong><\/h2>\n\n\n\n

Are there any parts of the story where the pressure and tension sags? Can this be made more exciting? Can you add in extra conflict and peril to keep the readers gripped?<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Dialogue<\/strong><\/h2>\n\n\n\n

Does the dialogue sound natural? Do each of the characters have unique voices?<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Factual Accuracy<\/strong><\/h2>\n\n\n\n

Is there any research you need to do to make sure what you\u2019re saying is factually accurate, perhaps relating to professional procedures, science or specialist knowledge?<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Stage Four \u2013 Tightening and Polishing<\/strong><\/h1>\n\n\n\n

Okay, now you\u2019re really on the home run.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

You\u2019ve got your basic story down, and you\u2019ve worked hard on characters, subplots, conflict, themes and accuracy.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

It\u2019s a good idea to get some space from the story at this point. You\u2019re probably raring to get on with the next stage (or perhaps you\u2019re ready for a break!) but try to take at least a week away from the manuscript \u2013 longer if possible. During this time, try not to think about it.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Once that time has passed, print it out (if you can) and read it all the way through from beginning to end. While you\u2019re doing this, make notes on anything you notice that you feel needs fixing, clarifying, or could be improved \u2013 but don\u2019t actually make any of those changes as you\u2019re going through.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Once you\u2019ve got your notes from the whole novel, you can make a plan for your final pre-feedback redraft.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Here\u2019s a suggested method for three categories to organise your notes into:<\/p>\n\n\n\n