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"Bonnie Hearn Hill has been my editor for almost 10 years. During that time she has edited book proposals, non-fiction and fiction manuscripts, and numerous articles for me. Her editorial skills are superior and she's one of the most sought after writing instructors in the country. She is one of those rare individuals who gives 100% to each of her students and clients. She's is truly dedicated to helping writers succeed. I can't recommend Bonnie highly enough, and I'm sure you'll hear the same thing from any of her clients." —Hazel Dixon-Cooper, author of: Born on a Rotten Day and Love on a Rotten Day, Simon & Schuster, and the Cosmopolitan magazine Bedside Astrologer column.

"The Slacker's Guide to US History was just purchased by Adams Media. We are so excited to be taking this step on our quest to become authors! Don and I wanted to thank you SOOOOO much for your help and advice on this project." —J. Mueller

"The network was responsive and helpful. Bonnie was fabulous. Her comments and edits were invaluable, and her mentorship and friendship are irreplaceable. Would definitely work with her again, and plan to do so soon." —(Contact info on request)

"I don’t think I could have found another editor ANYWHERE, as professional, responsive, knowledgeable, and personable as Bonnie." (Contact information on request)

"The information/bios for independent editors/evaluators on the web site was very helpful. I felt I could get a sense of the style and experience of the various consultants. All of the three potential consultants I chose initially, answered immediately and were available for follow-up until I was able to choose the best fit. It was easy and fast. Bonnie not only promptly answered my email, but also called once I expressed interest, to discuss her services, what exactly I was looking for, and my expectations for the result. She was clear about her subjectivity and what she would provide (and NOT provide) and when. It was clear by our conversation, (and by our on-going interaction and her involvement in various forums) that she actually enjoys helping writers. I selected her because of her enthusiasm, her background and experience, the fact that she is a many-times published author, and because it seemed not a “job” but her vocation. I am extremely pleased with that choice. Bonnie exceeded my expectations. Her feedback on my manuscript evaluation was thorough, constructive and positive related to changes that could improve the work. I didn’t feel she was telling me what I wanted to hear, but what I needed to hear. Yet, she provided 'hope' and encouragement to invest the additional time to work on the manuscript. Bonnie provided very detailed feedback on a portion of the writing that served as an example for me to sift through the rest, looking for similar improvement opportunities. She also provided a comprehensive evaluation at a higher level, that assessed strengths and weaknesses and provided suggestions for improvements. Since this was my first manuscript, I felt I could no longer be objective about whether it was worth pursing or not. Bonnie gave me clear feedback that helped me decide. And, bonus! She is a DELIGHT to work with. I will pursue her services again, and would highly recommend her as an knowledgeable, honest and constructive teacher/evaluator." Kimber Rau

"I could tell from our initial phone conversation after she'd read the first few chapters, that she was already caring about the story and the writing. She informed me that I had the ability to write the book proposal myself. The task seemed daunting, but under her leadership, I worked hard to prove her right. Not only did Bonnie give of her literary expertise, she gave her time—making herself assessable any hour of the day or night. At one point, I had the opportunity to attend a pitch slam in New York. Sixty-six agents and two editors would be represented. Bonnie asked that I send her the names. Then helped me choose the agents ... to speak to. ... When I told her that all six had invited me to send them my proposal, Bonnie's reaction was like that of a best buddy—she was thrilled for me. At one point, I'd realized I wanted to add more material to the chapters. I sent it to Bonnie. She approved and included in her edits, and when she returned the final edit, I was delighted. Other than some necessary restructuring and removal of extra lines—I have a tendency to overwrite—all the chapters as well as the proposal were kept in my own words. I highly recommend Bonnie to every author who is looking for 'hand holding' and special care." —Fran Mann